Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 20, 2021
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello sophie! Looks like you have been working really hard! Your story was really cool. By Amy.
ReplyDeleteHi Sophie,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your learning slide! You did a really good job at retelling the story, perhaps next time you could screencastify yourself reading the story.
Ka mau te wehi!
Miss Roberts
Hey Sophie,
ReplyDeleteWhat an awesome lockdown post! What a amazing story this is. Although being in lockdown isn't much fun, the work definetly is! Maybe next time you could do a voice recording of you reading the story. Also although we have stayed in lockdown for another week hopefully we will go to level 3 tomorrow. Keep up the great work! And stay safe!
Zara