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Friday, August 7, 2020
Hey there bloggers how has your day been ? My day has been good! So I decided to make a slide show on Pink the singer my mum and her friends went to a pink concert . Please read it !!!
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Hi there Sophie I like how you added pictures of Pink on the front page of your google slide. And I also like how you wrote about her family and where she came from.
ReplyDeleteHi Sophie! This is a great slide, it has lots of interesting facts about Pink, like I had no clue that pink had nearly 2 dozen tattoos! Maybe next time you could talk a bit more about her music career and were she started. But besides from that you did great!
ReplyDelete- Riley :)